STT 3,or loincloth w coconuts

Yes, there is a reason I put this up in deviations, despite the fact that it's obvious doodling. It kind of turned into a full-fledged, 3-page comic...this is the third page.

This is all due to because her marker work is so amazing. I've been debating on asking her if I can simply copy her style for a few drawings because I know if I did I'd learn a LOT from it (and then go back to whatever style I wanted)...She's an artist who knows what she's doing, and that's more than I can say.

Anywho, yeah. So this is me trying to get skin-tones out of bright, colorful, wal-mart markers...

(I put advanced cratique on this because I would like to hear back from you. (BTW, THIS IS AS RISKE AS YOU WILL EVER SEE ME GET!)